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Interesting ... Is this an old memory or something recent or are you keeping that a secret for now?
If I had any constructive criticism, it would just be this: detail is everything. The more detail the better.
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Interesting ... Is this an old memory or something recent or are you keeping that a secret for now?
If I had any constructive criticism, it would just be this: detail is everything. The more detail the better.
I am just finishing the old rp I was doing. Originally I had this big thing where someone found Brock while he was in hiding, there is a fight and bang, gun goes off. It was to write him out of 4cw, a cliff hanger, if he never came back he might be dead. But he is back, so Im just for my own sake I guess, telling the story of what happened after the shot went off and things went black, Sopranos style in his final rp of the old forums.
I just can't find the original last rp of Brock from the old boards, so I know it won't make much sense to anyone reading. Its my own peace with the character.
Last edited by Smokey Bear (Thu-20-Jun-2013 19:31:41)
Brock McSweeney had just run into his home out in the Mid-West, USA. Someone in a ski mask appears and goes to shoot Brock. The special forces expert leaps into action and wrestles the gun out of the persons hand. The last thing heard as the camera panned out of the house was a single gun shot. This is what happened...
Brock locks the person in an armbar getting the gun away, in a fit of rage Brock torques back and snaps the arm nearly in two. The person lays on the floor screaming in agony. McSweeney stands, and pulls the trigger. The bullet seems to come out in slow motion as it spirals through the air and pierces through the masked assailants skull. With blood all over Brock's chest and face he sets the weapon down carefully and pulls the mask off....
To Be Continued.....