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Read and post thoughts here please chaps. The new 4CW has arrived and we are posting the backstory to the new era. Stay tuned for part two...
Hilds
Don't forget, results might be storylined for the most part, but at PPV's and in most title matches they will be based on your involvement on the site and in the fed, so make sure you post a few words about part one of our 4CW Wedding story (especially as Belly did such an outstanding job writing this). The story we are telling here is the prequel to our Revival show, so make sure you read this, and the subsequent parts so you know what's going on!
Hilds
Well first off all it has left me a little confused just from not really knoing the people involded. I'm sure as the story moves forward more will be told about who they are and such. For what it's worth I hope the man they are trying to keep out is Senny dressed up as a street walker. That would be highly entertaining for me!
Thanks for the feedback renny. I was cobcerned about the new guys not knowibg who was involved. I'll try and edit part two so it makes more sense for newbs like u 😉
Unfortunately, there is no way to move from the old fed into the new one without making some references that some new guys may not understand and I do apologise for that, and for those who do not know details of the previous incarnation of 4CW, then I would hope you just enjoy the read and story as it unfolds, as it had been a while since I had done any kind of creative writing.
Just to clear it up though, Mr Andolini is the owner of 4CW as for the rest, some of that will be revealed in the next few segments...
Not sure if Mr Andolini was around when I was last active in 4CW. The name Eden seems to ring a few bells but I can't really place who she is and what she is about... I remember Ray Jeffrey ,Scott Phoenix and Sarah Loveless. Looking forward to the rest of this story to see where it goes and I'm sure you guy will do a fine job at painting a picture as to where 4CW is heading.
I love the idea hilds. Everything that goes forward has a past and we can't just erase it. I was in 4CW in 2004 so I remember and have history with the fed that my character can't forget nor would I want him too. As far as Mike Nichols is concerned the future looks good
I love the idea hilds. Everything that goes forward has a past and we can't just erase it. I was in 4CW in 2004 so I remember and have history with the fed that my character can't forget nor would I want him too. As far as Mike Nichols is concerned the future looks good
As much as I'd love to take credit for all of this, it was driven by Belly and [chux]. I recognise that we need to respect the past, but I haven't been in 4CW for 4 or 5 years now so have relied on those two to really fill in the details. Have to say, they have both done a great job, and have helped immensely to put us onto a decent footing to move forward.
Hilds
Stop the pressers Hilds isn't taking credit for something!
Stop the pressers Hilds isn't taking credit for something!
They work for me, so as i delegated thus job to them and i signed off on it then, really, I should get all the credit. Forget my earlier post...
It's weird so far. I know like half the names here but still. The whole wedding thing?
It's weird so far. I know like half the names here but still. The whole wedding thing?
Its the culmination of a story that was being told previously, and we have linked it to the rebirth. It's worth, in my opinion, sticking with as it's very good and really tells a great story.
Hilds
All the old shows are still up on the old site, it's something that's been in the works for a long time. It's a bit rushed now since we've lost so much time, but it's come out better than I'd planned it originally. It'll be more roleplayish than I'd like, but that's a thing again now so it's all good.
Just finished reading it, everything sounds good just trying to remember everyone from back in the day... I dont remember Vinny or Mr ando, but that is what happens when you pick up a story in the middle.
Wonder if this wedding will have a cliche interruption...
Once a man would spend a week patiently waiting if he missed a stage coach, but now he rages if he misses the first section of a revolving door.
April 2013.
The flowers are just beginning to bloom, the April sun beating down upon the on-rushing flurry of colours, highlighting the tiny insects as they flutter from flower to flower. The courtyard becoming a metropolitan of insect life as a small bee scurries away from a flower after receiving the gift of pollen but just as it escapes the flower, a large black boot stamps on the once flourishing flower, squashing it into the brown mud it had sprouted from. The owner of the black boot, continues his hurried pace across the grass and through the budding flower bed as he approaches two men, both large in stature, no less than 6 foot 6 inches tall each and they have to be tipping the scales at over 300lbs a piece yet both men try to hide their staggering size and weight within the confides of black suits and a golden waist coat struggling to keep its buttons as they are on the verge of bursting. A purple flower pinned onto the lapels of the men match the colour of the tie almost choking the breath from both men. The two men are well presented with their hair cut short and protruding from their ear is a wire, trailing down the back of their ear and clipping onto their shirt collars before disappearing underneath the collar and continuing down to a radio hidden but still visible, clipped onto the trouser waistband.
The boots that trampled on the blossoming flowers continues to march forward towards the two large gentleman, the owner and wearer of the boots is dressed in the same attire as the other men, a smart black suit with a golden waist coat and matching flower and tie to complete the outfit. His marching stride comes to a stop as he reaches the two men, yet even though both men are taller than this male, both react in a submissive manner as they greet him.
"You both know who you're looking out for?"
"Yes Sir."
"Do you have your photos to hand or do you need another?"
"No sir, we know who we are looking for, we have men stationed at all entrances to the building, no one will get past us."
"It's a cliché but when I said, if the name is not on the list they don't get in, I meant it."
"Yes Mr DeVici Sir, we understand."
"Hm. Make sure of that."
Vinny DeVici leaves the two men standing at the large arch doorway and continues past them, underneath the arch and into the impressive building, as he looks around at the towering arches and stained glass windows with images of men dressed in robes looking down upon them. The large hall encompassed with pews either side of a wide aisle, with a plush red carpet stretching the entire length of the aisle, all the way down to the front of the church where it stops beneath a large statue of Jesus Christ, as if it the man on the cross was over looking all that would sit before him.
Inside the church, the guests whom are already seated either side of the aisle, only a few in numbers, but all their heads turn to the doorway as Vinny DeVici steps through, all letting out a small sigh as they were expecting to see someone else. Vinny lets out a little smirk as he sees all the eyes focused upon him, even just for a few seconds, a feeling he has always sought after and one that makes him feel powerful. As the eyes turn away from him and focus back on the front of the church, Vinny begins to walk down the aisle, with the same purpose that he was walking with outside, a slight trace of dirt being rubbed off his boots as he walks down the red carpet. Reaching the front of the congregation another man stands up from the front pew, dressed the same as Vinny, but someone how looking more expensive in quality of clothing, and with a look of worry and angst in his face as he addresses Vinny.
"Vincent. What are you doing here? You're supposed to be outside, making sure that he doesn't-"
Vinny: "Don't worry Mr Andolini sir, everything is fine."
"Forgive my concerns, but I've heard that before."
Vinny: "I have hired the best men, outside the business. They all come highly recommended."
"If I don't know them, I can't trust them. Get back out there and handle it yourself."
Vinny: "Sir, I assure it is all taken care of. My place as best man is here by your side. If anything happens I will be the first to go sort it out."
"I'm relying on you. If anything happens, it's on your head. I won't let Eden down again, understand me?"
Before Vinny can answer, a man dressed in a long white robe and a purple Stole around his necks steps through a door to the side of the congregation and slowly makes his way past Mr Andolini and Vinny DeVici as he stops in the middle of the red carpet, underneath the gaze of the statue behind him. His hands release their grasp from one another and one motions towards Mr Andolini to make his way to the front of the church, which he nervously obliges and Vinny DeVici takes his place next to the groom in the rightful place of the best man. A small hand gesture to the organ player who was sitting in wait and then turns and her hands press down on the keys and as soon as the first note bellows out of the organ and circulates around the large church, all the guests rise to their feet and turn towards the large doorway once again. This time they are not disappointed though as the doors open simultaneously and standing in the middle of the door is the bride, dressed in a stunning white off the shoulder dress, showing off Eden's curves as it was tight fitting silk and lace with a 1m trail behind her. On her head was a veil that covered her face but could not hide her beauty as she stepped through the doors onto the red carpet, behind her wearing a purple and white silk gown was Candi, Eden's only bridesmaid whom was being careful not to stand on the trail to the magnificent dress. Al eyes were on Eden as she intended as she walked, unaccompanied by anyone giving her away, down the aisle towards the awaiting Groom who was growing increasingly nervous every step she made. Every person she passed in the aisle grew envious of either her or Mr Andolini, from Ray Jeffrey to Scott Phoenix, even Sarah Loveless can be seen with a tear in her eye as Eden passes her and the Wedding March ends as Eden arrives at the side of Mr Andolini in front of the priest.
TO BE CONTINUED