Mystery Opponent RP (Revival XI)

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Sun-23-Apr-2017 21:24:56 · 5,103 comments
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NOTE: This is being posted for Brian White's mystery opponent at Revival.

???: Don't just stare at me like that, say something!

The cold bronze eye just stares back at the man in the chair as he strums his fingers along the arm. A cat's paw swipes upward trying to catch the man's hands only to be swatted away.

???: I know, I've been gone forever, no one even remembers me. I'll make them remember. I'll use that Freight Train to ride back into 4CW glory.

He pauses for a moment as if listening to another side of the conversation only he can hear.

???: I know he's not a real train. It's a metaphor. He's the first step. His destruction will be my grand entrance. Next I'll take out the abomination, I will show them what a true pilgrim is.

The chair quickly turns around to reveal a penny in the man's other hand. They way he's holding it keeps his face from being seen except for the smears of unkempt makeup piled on his face.

???: Abe, you always know the right thing to say. They will never see this TWIST, ha ha ha ha, coming. I'll make them remember how wonderful their lives used to be with me in it. The Freight Train is about to step into my universe. His little friend will watch as he lies broken, battered, and derailed in the middle of the ring.

He walks over and pulls a red jacket off the coat rack in the corner.

???: It's time I made my grand entrance.

He places a large top hat on his head.

???: The world awaits my arrival.

He flings the penny forward towards the viewer, the shadow from his hat hiding his face, except for his smile, the smile of a true mad man.

???: 4CW, it's time.

The penny hits the screen and shatters it leaving only the sound of laughter.

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Tue-25-Apr-2017 23:18:00 · 5,103 comments
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A decent little RP, doing a good job at showing off key features of the character without revealing the identity. Also good to see some red herrings over the past few months in both the show and this RP to keep people guessing. It is a little short and a little hollow when it comes to story development but that was no doubt hindered by the need to keep the character mysterious. Either way, I look forward to seeing more from the effervescent and revamped Senecca.

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